The Personal Statement refers to the extended essay that students have to write, whether they are responding to one of the Common App or Coalition prompts, or Essay A for Apply Texas. Because the prompts for these essays are open-ended, most students use the same piece for all of their applications. Before putting pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard), check out these tips:
DO:
Tell a Story Remember, the "what happened" is less important than the "why it matters" element of your essay. Consider using a small moment to say something more significant.
Make It Personal Could a friend or parent identify this paper as yours? The essay should sound like you (read: it shouldn't sound like a parent, friend, coach, etc.)
Show Reflection or Vulnerability Use this essay to demonstrate growth, a change in attitude, or a shift in perspective. And it's OK if there isn't a tidy ending. (In fact, you should generally avoid sweeping conclusions such as, "From this, I learned the importance of perseverance.")
Use Concrete Examples Don't just tell your readers about what you did or what happened, show them.
Proofread And proofread again!
DON'T:
Use Cliches If you've heard a phrase a million times, so have the admissions officers reading your essay. And be wary of some overused topics (the volunteer trip, winning the big game, travel, etc.). Before writing on one of these, consider if you have something unique or unexpected to say first.
Be Redundant A list of awards and activities is a resume. The personal statement should reveal something about you that isn't elsewhere on your application.
Be Inauthentic If you aren't funny, this isn't the time to try and channel Stephen Colbert. Colleges want to know who you are and what makes you tick. On the flip side, there are some traits (sarcasm, negativity, arrogance) that don't usually enhance an essay.
Stress Out Yes, the essay is important, and you should spend time crafting a compelling piece of writing, but it is just one of many factors that colleges consider when reviewing your application. You can do this!
Once you've tackled the personal statement, check out my advice for writing supplemental essays here.